The Dickensblog 19th-century crossover fanfic challenge

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I think it's time for a new fanfic challenge around here. (That's code for "I'm suddenly and unaccountably bored with every book I'm reading and I want some good new Dickensian short stories to read.")

Here's the deal: I will give you a paragraph from a novel by another 19th-century author. You may recognize the passage, or you may not; it doesn't really matter, though I'll go ahead and let you know where it's from when everyone's done with their stories (if no one's guessed it by then).

Your mission, should you choose to accept it: Use it as your opening paragraph, and then build a Dickensian fanfic on it. It can, of course, be based on any Dickens book you desire.

Ready? Here's your paragraph:

"Unconscious of my presence, he began to pace the room in a state of fearful agitation, violently wringing his hands and uttering low groans or incoherent ejaculations. I made a movement to let him know that he was not alone; but he was too preoccupied to notice it. Perhaps, while his back was towards me, I might cross the room and slip away unobserved. I rose to make the attempt, but then he perceived me. He started and stood still a moment; then wiped his streaming forehead, and advancing towards me, with a kind of unnatural composure, said in a deep, almost sepulchural tone –"

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  1. Marian Avatar

    That’s a great paragraph! I’m can’t decide if it sounds familiar or not though… Luckily spring break is next week, so I’ll try to participate. 🙂
    And I promise I won’t Google it, though I’m sorely tempted to do so…

  2. AprilFool Avatar

    Word count? Due date? PRIZE?? (bribery, loot) . . . I’m sure I know where it’s from (haven’t looked it up yet) Am I supposed to say?

  3. Gina Avatar

    Word count: Whatever you want it to be.
    Due date: Whatever you want it to be, though it would be nice if it were soon, so I get my reading material sooner rather than later. 😀
    Prize: The compliments of your readers. 😉 We don’t generally do prizes for these.
    Oh, and you’re free to offer your guesses about where the passage is from.

  4. Marian Avatar

    I’m guessing it’s by Wilkie Collins or Bram Stoker… I have an idea for a short story/drabble, but it may take me a while to figure out how to write it.

  5. AprilFool Avatar

    I think it’s Jane Eyre, when she comes back to Rochester andhe’s blind.

  6. Gina Avatar

    It’s not “Jane Eyre” — but you’re actually pretty close!

  7. AprilFool Avatar

    ok I googled it so won’t say as it’s cheating!

  8. AprilFool Avatar

    Haven’t written fanfic before – does this qualify?
    . . . said in a deep, almost sepulchural tone —
    “I am in the presence of the Ghost of Christmas Yet To Come?” I didn’t answer – just pointed – I find it scares them more if I don’t talk.
    I’d been kind of bored with this guy and thought I might skip the whole intervention and let him get what was coming to him. But he seemed to insist, so I took him around to see all the usual the sights – the not-so-grieving servants pawning his bedclothes, his own grave – and then the kicker – the grieving family of the little crippled kid. Gets ’em every time – better than threatening to kill a kitten.
    It actually turned out to be a very successful intervention. He bought the turkey, scared his housekeeper, danced with his nephew’s wife, gave his clerk a raise, and celebrated the holiday with the best of them. It’s one of the best gigs I’ve ever had, and a lot more fun than scaring smokers or drunk drivers.

  9. Gina Avatar

    HA! I love it! You may never have written fanfic before, but you’re really good. 🙂 Thanks for participating!

  10. Christy Avatar

    Hahahahaa! That was awesome. I was also vaguely pondering the Ghost scene, though not from such a creative point of view.

  11. Marian Avatar

    “I didn’t answer – just pointed – I find it scares them more if I don’t talk.”
    Brilliant!
    I didn’t even think of doing Christmas Yet to Come, but it does fit very well. 🙂 Currently working on my story; hope to post it soon!

  12. Gina Avatar

    How’s that story coming, Marian? I’m very eager to read it! 🙂

  13. Marian Avatar

    Well, it’s about 2/3 finished, but I’m having a bit of writer’s block for the last 1/3. 😛 I’m either going to finish that and then post it, or go ahead and post what I’ve written as “part 1″…

  14. Nina Avatar

    I may try this if I find a good moment (I haven’t written any Dickens-fic since last summer, waaah D:)! Great idea, Gina. 🙂

  15. Gina Avatar

    Keeping my fingers crossed that you can find a good moment! 🙂

  16. Christy Avatar

    I want to write something for it too, but no inspiration has struck.

  17. Gina Avatar

    Marian, where’s your story??

  18. Marian Avatar

    I did finish it, but it didn’t turn out as good as the original idea. 😛 I can still post it, if you want?

  19. Gina Avatar

    Please do! I really want to read it! And I’m sure it’s better than you think. 🙂

  20. Marian Avatar

    Ok. 🙂
    http://tulgeyforest.blogspot.com/2011/04/ashes.html
    Let me know if there are any typos/etc. I checked, but sometimes I miss even spelling errors.

  21. Gina Avatar

    My word, girl! That was wonderful!! I can’t believe you didn’t think it turned out well!

  22. Marian Avatar

    Thanks. 🙂 I guess it just seemed a bit rusty, since I haven’t been writing much lately.

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